This is the feedback that we recieved from the other memebers of our media class:
camera work:
Lots of really good different angles. good amount of shots, everything is in time, variety of shots makes it more interesting. good framing which worked well with pace of music. some shots not in focus but that makes it better.
editing:
good pace of editing, and good use of slow motion clips maybe use a variety of effects. god cross of editing, lip synching needs to be improved. good movement in shots. quick fast editing makes it exciting.
effects:
slow motion looks really good and so does the fast motion at the end. worked well with the genre. like the way at the beginning where we go from the shots with each person. shows the link.other footage and shots are allright.
mise en scene:
good variety of locations, costumes looked good and matched the theme of the song. interesting places, looks good as a background. exciting locations.
performance:
believeable acting, confident dosn't look cheesy. good performance such as the dancing bt more performing with lip synch. dancing shots are authentic. successful performance. fits well with music.
continuity:
clips work well one after the other - no jumpy parts. made sense, it reflects its genre well. blank black space probably because you havent fineshed.
